My crossover story just has its first review. Though I really need to improve it as well. read the reader's review:
Review by Nikkou-tan
First off, I like the plot so far. You're mixing the HiME and SF elements, which is good. The problem with some crossovers is that they favor one story over the other.
However, I'm not sure if I like how some of the fighting scenes are based on the SF video game format. It was much easier to follow along with scenes that are written out.
Also, you can get repetitive at times. Especially in the most recent chapter.
But I really do like this story. Keep it up